Looks pretty cool to me. Just need some sound and dialogue to make it a little more interesting. Like some of your designs.
I wish I got 100s in classes... XD
This was well done!
The animation'a alright, rather simple but effective, and Speakonia never fails to make flashes funny! XD
Something you may want to fix is the song at the end during the credits. It keeps playing even after you press the replay button. :P
lol, sorry about that one.
The animation was alright, and the humour was quirky but nothing that I could really laugh hard at. (I'm absolutely sure other people will enjoy this!) It's also very short. Not that that's a huge issue but a lot of shit happened in a short amount of time!
All-in-all: Good job! :D
Thanks, yeah. It is pretty fast paced. I wanted it that way. I usually don't make 5 minute flashes. I just do stuff as tests and stuff.
Yeah he reminds me of a subtitute teacher we'd get over here: really funny. LOL
I liked the dialogue and art. Both can use SOME improvement but don't lose sleep over it. I wan't too keen on the animation but that's something you get from lots of practice I guess. Try making a FBF flash animation, they can sometimes be more effective than tweening (but I did see lots of both in this flash).
Good work though, I thought it was funny, and congrats on your first Newgrounds submission!
thanks. there will be more improvement in later installments. When i had this guy he would have us call him by his first name and he was clueless
He's gonna do it. He's gonna do it! YEAH!
I recently reviewed the preview you submitted a while back and now I finally got to watch the final product. Awesome! I loved just about everything about this flash, especially the ending and the music. Love it! :D
This isn't right...
The flips were cool for a fight scene but everything else was really bad.
The enemies basically stood there as they got the crap kicked out of them.
The plot didn't really make any sense in the beginning, and the ending just kind of ruined the whole point of watching it. (Even though most madness episodes have the main character beaten to death at the end!)
Madness as blocks is a cool idea though! :)
I didn't mind this at all. The animation was alright, the voice acting was pretty good, and overall plot/play was really cool. I also really like your art style and characters.
Thanks man... yeh I have not delved into sleekness nor do I seek to get all slick and " illustratory " Never mind that this was early work, but I am more about writing idea most times and getting it completed is actually the drag. What a luxury if I could find like 50 Koreans LOL
What the shit!?!
So stupid, it's funny!
The dialogue was iffy. There were a couple of things you said that made me chuckle but unfortunately it was very poorly done.
I'm not telling you to stop making these; just don't expect me to like them if they're all going to be similar to this one.
One hungry fish.
Good plot, especially the end (even if the propeller on his head didnt make the least bit of sense). I noticed a lot of neat effects in the flash but all-in-all, it wasn't touched up enough to be considered a great flash. I have mixed feelings for the flash but it was okay. I hope you still plan on subitting part 2.
Yep I'll make part 2 and I'll make it way better than this one, I promise you!
Wait, does that mean they're cannibals?
Short but funny...for a little while. Then it's just like, "WTF was that?"
There wasn't any "real" animation to this; just moving pictures.
It would aslo be better if you maybe gave the "shit-people" some quirky dialogue.
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