Good
Looks pretty cool to me. Just need some sound and dialogue to make it a little more interesting. Like some of your designs.
I wish I got 100s in classes... XD
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Good
Looks pretty cool to me. Just need some sound and dialogue to make it a little more interesting. Like some of your designs.
I wish I got 100s in classes... XD
This was well done!
The animation'a alright, rather simple but effective, and Speakonia never fails to make flashes funny! XD
Something you may want to fix is the song at the end during the credits. It keeps playing even after you press the replay button. :P
lol, sorry about that one.
Eveything was...good.
The animation was alright, and the humour was quirky but nothing that I could really laugh hard at. (I'm absolutely sure other people will enjoy this!) It's also very short. Not that that's a huge issue but a lot of shit happened in a short amount of time!
All-in-all: Good job! :D
Thanks, yeah. It is pretty fast paced. I wanted it that way. I usually don't make 5 minute flashes. I just do stuff as tests and stuff.
Not bad.
Meh. It was alright. A little too easy but at least it looks like the coding works.
But I got to level 10 and it said 'game over'. I didn't do anything! XD Maybe that's a problem?
Crazy!
I think this very impressive. The mood is nice, and the background and overall tones and lighting are incredibly fun to look at.
I think the only thing that bothers me a great amount is her left shoulder supporting her weight. From this angle, it definitely looks a little dislocated compared to the other shoulder, and should shift closer to her body for better symmetry and balance.
She also does not look like she's leaning her weight toward her arm, which makes it look awkward and uncomfortably tense to have the shoulder shifted up so high.
This also makes her shoulder width look wider than her hips, which isn't anatomically correct.
But otherwise, great work~! Definitely finding a nice cozy spot in the favorites. :3
Thank you much for the time you took to say something meaningful ^____^
You pointed this out very well, and I have to say, that it's right. When I created the image over 3 years ago, I thought the anatomy was perfect. But you never stop to imprve, and today I agree to the flaws you pointed out - as well as the viewer's left foot here, I think it might look a bit strange.
I am planning to do another image like this sometimes this year. Will keep such details in mind for that one then ^^
*cough* YIFFSTAR *cough*
CAN I HAS UNCENSORED TOO? :B Lol The past reviewers amused me.
You already know what I think of this. It isn't bad at all. :3
YES! XD
I love what you did to his drawing. Epic shading and highlights, and overall just a very interesting job! :)
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Algonquin College
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